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From an early age, Ron is a chess player who spends most of his time playing with older people or watching them play
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The tense in this sentence seems better suited for the present perfect progressive tense. According to the link below, this tense "expresses actions that began in the past and continue to the present and actions that have recently stopped." That would make the transition smoother from Ron's early age until now.
If Ron is no longer playing chess and/or the overall context is in the past, it would look like this:
From an early age, Ron had been a chess player who spent most of his time playing with older people or watching them play.
If Ron is still playing chess and/or the overall context is in the present, it would look like this:
From an early age, Ron has been a chess player who spends most of his time playing with older people or watching them play.
https://writingexplained.org/grammar-di ... verb-tense
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