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Good Morning,

As I write these thoughts, what in them would you all consider a better sentence:

As humans, we are fallible creatures and much of it due to the struggles we face and our inability to get out of our own way.
2. first an egg, fragile and breakable; then a caterpillar building to become larva;
3. That goal in reaching our conscious mind to self-realization

Where can I find this International Grammer tool?

Thanks in advance for your thoughts.

Scribens and Grammarly are good options, you can try them.

If you are wanting suggestions to improve each of these sentences, here's what I would do:

1). "As humans, we are fallible creatures and much of it due to the struggles we face and our inability to get out of our own way"
>> "As humans, we are fallible creatures, and mostly due to the struggles we face and our inability to get out of our own way.

2). "first an egg, fragile and breakable; then a caterpillar building to become larva;"
>> "first an egg—fragile and breakable—then a caterpillar becoming larva."

3). "That goal in reaching our conscious mind to self-realization"
>> "That goal in pushing our conscious mind to self-realization"

I can't offer much more without knowing the context of the sentences. Hopefully this helps!

Benitasyanora Yanora wrote: ↑17 Nov 2022, 09:22 Good Morning,

As I write these thoughts, what in them would you all consider a better sentence:

As humans, we are fallible creatures and much of it due to the struggles we face and our inability to get out of our own way.
2. first an egg, fragile and breakable; then a caterpillar building to become larva;
3. That goal in reaching our conscious mind to self-realization

Where can I find this International Grammer tool?

Thanks in advance for your thoughts.

What do you mean by "our inability to get out of our own way." ?