Grammar help!
Posted: 01 Aug 2023, 11:09
Greetings for the day!
I have a request for comments in this post on some errors remarked on in a recent review, and I have my case being discussed for the same. I thank you for your time and consideration for any suggestions shared here.
Please remark on these sentences for errors:
1. An intense beginning with so many characters smoothly introduced in the initial pages, lending an intriguing plot; very well written!
2. It's a well-written, eventful story which is filled with amazement.
3. Sarah learns so much from them about their past, their ancestors, and their life stories.
The editorial team made corrections later.
Any suggestion here can guide to make better the possible style errors and actual grammar errors and also mark them as necessary or rather unnecessary errors remarked. Please cite the sources you access for help with grammar correction.
I have a request for comments in this post on some errors remarked on in a recent review, and I have my case being discussed for the same. I thank you for your time and consideration for any suggestions shared here.
Please remark on these sentences for errors:
1. An intense beginning with so many characters smoothly introduced in the initial pages, lending an intriguing plot; very well written!
2. It's a well-written, eventful story which is filled with amazement.
3. Sarah learns so much from them about their past, their ancestors, and their life stories.
The editorial team made corrections later.
Any suggestion here can guide to make better the possible style errors and actual grammar errors and also mark them as necessary or rather unnecessary errors remarked. Please cite the sources you access for help with grammar correction.