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I'm writing a review and I'm not sure if I'm writing it correctly. Here is the part I'm stuck with:

Each chapter begins with a "myth" such as, "Magic happens randomly to me". It then goes on to tell a story from the author's life that dispels that myth and reveals the truth.

Is it okay to start a new sentance after "to me" as I did or should I should I say "to me", it then goes....."?? Any help is appreciated, thank you.

I would start a new sentence if I were you. (That is if I'm understanding you correctly.)

kandscreeley wrote: ↑15 Dec 2017, 12:17 I would start a new sentence if I were you. (That is if I'm understanding you correctly.)

Thank you very much. That's what I thought as well, but wasn't sure.

I hope I got you right. You should start a new sentence after the "........ to me."

Yes!!! . You should start a new sentence after "to me" to compliment the sentence structure .