Grammar Question
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- Stephen Campana
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- MrsCatInTheHat
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I would leave out "of this book." Everyone knows you're talking about the book. Unnecessary words don't add to the quality of the review. Just say, "In Part One, Jack shared with Jill."
- mommaing
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