Friend (poem)

[Ikiri81]

Friend

A friend is funny.
A friend is sweet.
A friend is kind.
A friend is nice.

A friend is always there for you.
Whether it is morning, or evening,
Both day and night.
Whether it is raining, snowing, or
The sun is shining bright.

A friend is always next to you.
When you are feeling sad,
or even when you are mad.
And sometimes when you are doing something bad.

A friend will come to just say hi,
And tell you something that will make you go "Why?"
A friend will be there through thick and thin.

But If a friend just is not so,
Then that friend has got to go.

[Nathrad Sheare]

Ever heard the joke about what makes a great friend? A sweet friend will talk to you when you call from jail. A good friend will bail you out. A great friend will be right next to you in the cell saying, "That was AWESOME!" A nice poem you composed here. I like the differences in the line format of each verse. Nice rhythm, too.

-- 16 Dec 2013, 03:58 --

I love to write poetry. LOVE to. How many poems have you written? Got any more?

[miriam123373]

This is a nice, cheerful poem. I think evening out the rhyming pattern to something more traditional would help create fluidity, but it is heartfelt.

[elicia7887]

Absolutely true every word. Ive experienced this before. Love this poem.

[lbuckman]

Very nice poem!