Break Me No More

[Wordlover]

I'll write a poem every once in a while that will be specific to this forum and my deviant art account

Agony reigns through the torn vessels that you left to wither under the shadows of your broken promises,
void are your emotionless kisses
for i no longer reach to your smile for comfort
but embrace the sadness as the dew of midnight washes across the window seal,
let these tears be the sea of which i drown
for sadness is my only escape from this ravaging pain
and let these tarnished memories rest blankly along the path of hopelessness,
I am no longer whole but a shattered fragment of myself without you,
embrace me once more, so this fear resides in your arms never to be felt again, without you i'm nothing but a soul of sin,
your love is the glue that keeps me together

with you I am whole, please...
break me no more

BY: Word lover aka: Daniel Brown aka: Me lol

Much success to anyone who's trying to be a writer in any form.

[Fran]

Really touching .... very well done

[Teesie]

It's very good. I like it a lot.

[andr70]

Why did you think that someone wouldn't like your poem?! It's awesome and wonderful in deed.

[Cheryl Rendone]

You are very talented, this is a great poem!! Most of my poems are about love or heart break as well.