Land of make believe

[groove]

I wrote this at the request of a friend who needed ideas for a poster she is doing for her school to promote education kids in other countries. Its short but I think this is better that way.

A land of make believe would have to be
children playing for as far as the eye can see.
School bells ringing in little students ears.
teenage girls allowed to learn without fear.

Battle weary soldiers, home from the war.
Soldiers wives aren't breaking down no more.
Guns get put away,forever silencing the sound of death.
Mothers wipe wet eyes, and let out their held up breath.

[Eric McClean]

Both the paragraphs are awesome.

[lagym888]

Good Writing there.! May i ask.?? What inspires you to come up with these..