Love poem I wrote

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jasperellis
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Re: Love poem I wrote

Post by jasperellis »

Awesome its good

-- 09 Jun 2012, 00:14 --

It wasn't a really good poem. Keep it up.
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louisgeorge
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Post by louisgeorge »

So sweet i like it ...great work keep it up ..
Un-Break My Heart , Un-Cry These Tears , Say You Will Love Me Again
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AmandaRose
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Post by AmandaRose »

How sweet it is! I think I just got a cavity in my tooth. From my point of view, I would keep making adjustments as time goes by, possibly making it more sincere and really from the heart. Think outside the box, and remember, not all poems have to rhyme. :)
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