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Kavita Shah
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Riddle me this
Have you seen an eclipse
Dark and red
Hazy and round?


If you think we are bubble of spectra
Light, energy, rhythm,
All entwined and connected
To make life possible


In the shadows they thrive
Misfortune their drive
Gold and silver
Encourages greediness
Their needs endless


Tell no one
Call them secrets
Lies in silence
Awaiting full moon


Butterfly effect or an illusion
Fundamental concepts are mere allusions
Maybe a chemical reaction or solution
Says its time for evolution.

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Post by Donald Donaldson »

Kavita Shah wrote: 06 May 2023, 12:58 Riddle me this
Have you seen an eclipse
Dark and red
Hazy and round?


If you think we are bubble of spectra
Light, energy, rhythm,
All entwined and connected
To make life possible


In the shadows they thrive
Misfortune their drive
Gold and silver
Encourages greediness
Their needs endless


Tell no one
Call them secrets
Lies in silence
Awaiting full moon


Butterfly effect or an illusion
Fundamental concepts are mere allusions
Maybe a chemical reaction or solution
Says its time for evolution.

This is a nice poem. I see that you wrote each paragraph in a different color. That actually goes well with your profile picture. Kudos. You did well.
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Kavita Shah
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Posts: 3116
Joined: 12 Dec 2020, 12:30
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Bookshelf Size: 188
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Donald Donaldson wrote: 30 May 2023, 13:23
Kavita Shah wrote: 06 May 2023, 12:58 Riddle me this
Have you seen an eclipse
Dark and red
Hazy and round?


If you think we are bubble of spectra
Light, energy, rhythm,
All entwined and connected
To make life possible


In the shadows they thrive
Misfortune their drive
Gold and silver
Encourages greediness
Their needs endless


Tell no one
Call them secrets
Lies in silence
Awaiting full moon


Butterfly effect or an illusion
Fundamental concepts are mere allusions
Maybe a chemical reaction or solution
Says its time for evolution.

This is a nice poem. I see that you wrote each paragraph in a different color. That actually goes well with your profile picture. Kudos. You did well.
Thank you! (〜^∇^)〜
Colors add to the beauty of poems. I use colors to add to the looks and gather more attention to them.
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