BECAUSE IT'S FRIDAY

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BECAUSE IT'S FRIDAY

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Answers come when you don't expect them. And a ray of light can disappear behind the shadow of an ominous cloud. So precarious, the context in which one faces the world. A moment, an honorable result, a terrible confusion in the mind, an enemy flame looking slyly at you. You have shed tears and hopes. Maybe, something wrong inside your heart. It's time to make amends and realize how much strength it takes in harmonizing a solfeggio. And how little it takes to hear the right note slip into the air.
This poem is dedicated to those who are able to stay balanced in a sometimes bizarre world. Now, you will say what does Friday have to do with it? Maybe it doesn't, but it's a watershed between the life you have been living in a forced way and the light toward a new future. Happy reading to all. If you like it, check out my book review, a hysterical encounter doesn't always come randomly and maybe it helps you live better. HAPPY READING TO YOU, poetic heart, Gianlubodai
👉the poem "LIGHTS & STORMS & MORE" :
Answers come when you don't expect them. And a ray of light can disappear behind the shadow of an ominous cloud. So precarious, the context in which one faces the world. A moment, an honorable result, a terrible confusion in the mind, an enemy flame looking slyly at you. You have shed tears and hopes. But maybe something wrong inside your heart. It's time to make amends and realize how much strength it takes in harmonizing a solfeggio. And how little it takes to hear the right note slip into the air. This poem is dedicated to those who are able to stay balanced in a sometimes bizarre world. Now, you will say what does Friday have to do with it? Maybe it doesn't, but it's a watershed between the life you have been living in a forced way and the light toward a new future. Happy reading to all. If you like it, check out my book review, a hysterical encounter doesn't always come randomly and maybe it helps you live better.
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Wow, this is so unique. It's indeed captivating.
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You wrote well, I enjoyed reading it
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I first thought it was a kind of self help write up, because it looks like a poem and self help. Well, that's expertise. Good job.
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The answer that comes suddenly wben one didn't expect it, is it better to be used or the one you've spent time on or researched? I just noted that first line and I pondered on it.
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The poem is intiriguing. It seems to hold a lot of emotions.
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This poem is very great. I congratulate you as you are destined for the top.
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"Friday vibes in the air! Time to unwind, embrace the weekend spirit, and let the joyous rhythm of Friday carry us into relaxation and fun."
Great poem btw
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Great emotions reading opinion about my poem, thanks a lot, remember you gave to take on Amazon ebook/book my urban poetry work PASSENGER CONTACT FOR HYSTERICAL SUBCONSCIOUS
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The poem is intiriguing. It seems to hold a lot of emotions.
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