Some poems...
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groove
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Some poems...
snow5
Sometimes I look at the snow
and hate how it reminds me
of how you and I are so
your lost and I am crazy
other times I am afraid
that it wont snow again
and what's left for me will fade
_Nothing comes out of my pen_
***********another poem
Fall out shelter
maybe after the fall out
I will find some one like me
and we will find some shelter
just not a fall out shelter
I like the big shiny lights
and small spaces get to me
I just thought hiding my self
was a good idea until
I stepped outside the shelter
to see everything gone
Sometimes I look at the snow
and hate how it reminds me
of how you and I are so
your lost and I am crazy
other times I am afraid
that it wont snow again
and what's left for me will fade
_Nothing comes out of my pen_
***********another poem
Fall out shelter
maybe after the fall out
I will find some one like me
and we will find some shelter
just not a fall out shelter
I like the big shiny lights
and small spaces get to me
I just thought hiding my self
was a good idea until
I stepped outside the shelter
to see everything gone
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Emanprinting
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Sweetrustedchild
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i had always thought that poem writing and songwriting were two completely different things. i thought that they had different tone and rhythms.i could be wronglagym888 wrote:Pretty good poems..Poems are the start of song writing, you can be a song writer you know.. Come up with a tune.! Your work is good stuff.. Keep Up.!
