MY LOVER
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Derakriz
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MY LOVER
To you my lover
Your name has sank deep down into my soul
Your eyes glitters like gold,so bold that it glows as my heart skips a bit
Your soft touch has been fermented into my veins
My heart yearns for you
My head aches of memories which can never be lost in the sands of time
With your lips glued to mine,i don't wanna let go
Your smile pasted deep down into my heart
Oh no! I don't wanna let go of this pleasant feeling
For your heart has been made a part of mine
Am all drowned in the ectasy of your love
With every single memory preserved in the boxes of my mind
Now tell me how do i live without you?
How do i abstain from you now?
Your name has sank deep down into my soul
Your eyes glitters like gold,so bold that it glows as my heart skips a bit
Your soft touch has been fermented into my veins
My heart yearns for you
My head aches of memories which can never be lost in the sands of time
With your lips glued to mine,i don't wanna let go
Your smile pasted deep down into my heart
Oh no! I don't wanna let go of this pleasant feeling
For your heart has been made a part of mine
Am all drowned in the ectasy of your love
With every single memory preserved in the boxes of my mind
Now tell me how do i live without you?
How do i abstain from you now?
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crediblereading2
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angel+maima
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the love felt is inseparable. Regret shall come to pass if separation happens.
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lbhatters
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Good work. Keep writing.
Start by doing what's necessary; then do what's possible; and suddenly you are doing the impossible. -Fransis of Assisi
It's perfectly ok to write garbage, as long as you edit brilliantly.
-C.J. Cherryh
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Neha_Jha
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A good piece of work, definitely carrying intense emotions. But on poetry lines.....The poet has scope of improvement. There's a lot of scope to beautify your work.
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CHRIS2428
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Just like JLo said "love don't cost a thing". But it ain't true.
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Ryne04
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poetry is life and life is poetry, you clearly know the essence of this-
Shanna-Austin
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I love it its very deep great work keep on wrighting
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Andrew winter
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It is so loving n flowing.... Urge Avery good poet kip it up... :
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Ssebuuma Brian
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True love isn'tRomeo and Juliet who died together. It's Grandma and Grandpa who grew old together.
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Sonofzeus
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It's all about the feeling
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TaaraLynn
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Love! More, please.
"Maybe the two different worlds we lived in weren't so different. We saw the same sunset." - Ponyboy Curtis, The Outsiders
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SamTaylor98
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This hit me right in the soul.
