my new poem

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Sweetrustedchild
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my new poem

Post by Sweetrustedchild »

I met a man named death
and he appealed to me
he showed me all the things
that i want to be

we walked along the road
and talked for about a hour
how life is not so sweet
but mainly mostly sour

it was quite a walk
we talked all the way
and by the end
i think i was swayed

i met a man named death
he appealed to me
he showed me many things
about being free
Tushu
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Post by Tushu »

good :D
andr70
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Post by andr70 »

Could you make a poem about life and everything green and shiny around us!
Please!
Nitromeaga
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Post by Nitromeaga »

good friend . may you you will be writer :)
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Post by BookWorm617 »

Very good...I really enjoyed it!!
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Post by Almo99 »

A very good poem. It may be time to get some antidepressants though.
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Post by emidio125 »

Great!
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Post by Eriny Youssef »

Enjoyed it, keep writing 🙌🏼
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Post by Sampaio »

It was incredible, very good my friend.
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Post by Tobi Adefila »

A great poem by the way. But why death though? :|.
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