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my new poem

Posted: 10 Oct 2010, 00:40
by Sweetrustedchild
I met a man named death
and he appealed to me
he showed me all the things
that i want to be

we walked along the road
and talked for about a hour
how life is not so sweet
but mainly mostly sour

it was quite a walk
we talked all the way
and by the end
i think i was swayed

i met a man named death
he appealed to me
he showed me many things
about being free

Posted: 09 Nov 2010, 06:46
by Tushu
good :D

Posted: 08 Dec 2010, 12:11
by andr70
Could you make a poem about life and everything green and shiny around us!
Please!

Posted: 10 Dec 2010, 07:41
by Nitromeaga
good friend . may you you will be writer :)

Posted: 10 Jan 2011, 21:41
by BookWorm617
Very good...I really enjoyed it!!

Posted: 24 Jan 2011, 14:39
by Almo99
A very good poem. It may be time to get some antidepressants though.

Re: my new poem

Posted: 08 Nov 2020, 07:34
by emidio125
Great!

Re: my new poem

Posted: 12 Nov 2020, 17:39
by Eriny Youssef
Enjoyed it, keep writing 🙌🏼

Re: my new poem

Posted: 21 Feb 2024, 07:57
by Sampaio
It was incredible, very good my friend.

Re: my new poem

Posted: 29 Feb 2024, 11:53
by Tobi Adefila
A great poem by the way. But why death though? :|.