From the weak poet

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From the weak poet

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Do you feel when he called you
Some say he was innocent
Called from the heavens
And screamed the amour
From the skies to hell
He is the innocent king
Beloved by everybody
But without respect
Except if you respect death
vengeance or suicide.
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Wow, that's deep.
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Why only a full stop at the end?
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Thank you so much for choosing to share this with us! :D
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why so sad?
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I really like this! There are a lot of different people I picture while reading. Keep up the good work!
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very creative of you..i am impressed
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Post by Je1627 »

It’s a nice piece of poetry, but why the different tenses? Is it to add some kid of mood or a simple error?
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nooregano wrote: ↑19 Mar 2019, 03:48 Thank you so much for choosing to share this with us! :D
It is a nice piece, right?
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Post by Avishi »

Unique title. Nice poem .I loved it. 👌
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This was a well-written piece. The whole quality of this poetry exudes genuineness. Simple language were chosen that the audience could understand. You performed a fantastic job, and I wish you grow and prosper more.
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