I think pellucid succeeded in making the reader pay close attention to the words. It was a unique way to draw the readers attention and it succeeded, for me.Kro92813 wrote: ↑29 Sep 2019, 22:44Do you think pellucid succeeded with her use of words in this story?Mr Benji wrote: ↑29 Sep 2019, 12:44 "Language" is one way that an author uses to grab the attention of an audience. It is a tool that create a mood or makes a connection with a reader. I think I support this "usage" in this story
Similarly, I think that the language most times leave an impact on such a mind even afterwards.
Moreover, I think if more words are added in the sequel, it would enhance this effect on the reader.
Thank you for such a question.
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I think it worked, but I didn't love all of the wordsFerdinand_otieno wrote: ↑30 Sep 2019, 00:31I think pellucid succeeded in making the reader pay close attention to the words. It was a unique way to draw the readers attention and it succeeded, for me.Kro92813 wrote: ↑29 Sep 2019, 22:44Do you think pellucid succeeded with her use of words in this story?Mr Benji wrote: ↑29 Sep 2019, 12:44 "Language" is one way that an author uses to grab the attention of an audience. It is a tool that create a mood or makes a connection with a reader. I think I support this "usage" in this story
Similarly, I think that the language most times leave an impact on such a mind even afterwards.
Moreover, I think if more words are added in the sequel, it would enhance this effect on the reader.
Thank you for such a question.
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