Perversion or relationship?
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Re: Perversion or relationship?
It shouldn't have been dubbed YA in the first place. Even though I don't think it qualifies as erotica and certainly not porn (there are far more explicit books out there in almost every bookstore's romance section), having his resistance crumble and beginning an actual relationship with his mom would have taken it up (down?) several levels in tone. I agree that it would probably have led to his acting out in other areas/ways as well.Howlan wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 15:03Yes, it would have been really disturbing and the book would have been erotica instead of YArbrochhausen wrote: ↑24 Feb 2020, 21:55 If Carly hadn't come into the scene I think Adam would've kept spiraling out of control. His feelings towards his mother were not normal and he didn't know how to handle himself. I think his emotions would have got the better of him and he would keep acting out in worse and worse ways.
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And I started reading this book because it was a YA and it sounded like an action-thriller. Never thought it would begin with such craziness.
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Yes it was a major turn off.
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Right? I never thought I would read that sentence!Howlan wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 15:35Jamie and Cersi looks much tamer than Adam if he would have crossed the line.Nym182 wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 15:33Is it weird that I was more accepting of Jamie and Cersei from game of thrones?gilliansisley wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 12:06
Yeah, that was his mom, end of story. Just because they weren't biologically related, it's still creepy AF. Doesn't make it okay!

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The serum is the perfect incest scapegoat!Howlan wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 15:36Yeah and it would have been perfectly acceptable as they were the effects of the serum!!Nym182 wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 11:41right? I also think that if Adam eventually acted on his feelings, Jo probably wouldn't have given much resistance to his advances.Kelyn wrote: ↑25 Feb 2020, 20:52
I think that's what turned the corner on whether or not he would act on his obsession if Carly hadn't come along. Once his stepmom let it be known that she returned his feelings, that would have been the 'death knell' for his resistance (he didn't have all that much, to begin with).
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Agreed!
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It's like she took a character from another book and tried to make him fit in.Howlan wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 15:39Yes, I wonder what the author was trying to do!gilliansisley wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 12:03So damn true-- how were these feelings supposed to help us resonate with Adam, and feel bad for him after all the terrible things he's done? I'm not sure what the goal was with this character, realistically.
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I totally blocked out that he sniffed the blood...Howlan wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 15:40We are talking about a serial killer who has sniffed blood here!gilliansisley wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 12:05EXACTLY. The same as, "OHHHH you have magical powers you can't understand? That explains why you kidnapped, almost raped and basically killed Terry. That's totally okay!"


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I hope so!Howlan wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 15:41There has to be some terrible karma saved up for him.gilliansisley wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 12:07No way, there's no chance that anything he could have done would have redeemed himself. He was a psychopath from the getgo, and that was never going to be "changed by teenage love". Just awful.
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Right? Jo returning those feelings just took it too far...Howlan wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 15:42Agreed. It was really sickening to read about it.
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It's got a lot of good reviews on Amazon as well!Howlan wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 15:44Yes I could see lines of 4 stars in the reviews.
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I mean, I guess I will give the author some credit for thinking outside the box by trying to give Adam the quickest turn around from evil psychopath to an all-around good guy.Howlan wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 15:46I was thinking along the lines of " This is how villains are made"Nym182 wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 15:30The first half of the book just consisted of me thinking "are we supposed to be cool with this or what?"gilliansisley wrote: ↑26 Feb 2020, 12:03
So damn true-- how were these feelings supposed to help us resonate with Adam, and feel bad for him after all the terrible things he's done? I'm not sure what the goal was with this character, realistically.![]()
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I agree! haha I very rarely put down a book even if I hate it

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I agree! Although, it does get me in trouble every once in awhile

