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That seems to be the intention, but I think that it lost many of the readers for how rushed and abrupt the ending ultimately felt. Much of the audience is no completely puzzled as opposed to being excited. Thanks for your insight!
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I definitely agree with you. It really could've been wrapped up in a singular book. Now this second book brings up a multitude of problems for the readability of the story.Marcel Cantu wrote: ↑02 Jan 2022, 15:02I agree that the ending was abrupt and convoluted. Instead or providing a cohesive end it created problems with the attempt to be a cliff hanger.Wesusa wrote: ↑01 Jan 2022, 13:20 A common trend permeating a great many of the reviews of "The Prodigy Slave" on the site revolve around its cryptic ending. I recently read through it, and although I enjoyed the book for the most part, I too was a bit confused by the ending. While I quite enjoyed its significance to the story and its nature of being a cliffhanger does induce some excitement for the sequel, I don't think it stuck the landing completely. It felt a bit abrupt and not cohesive enough. What did you think of the ending? Was it effective, or did it simply not need to happen?
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I have read all 3 books and it sums up the all loose ends and it has a multitude of obstacles that arise in the next 2 books.Elisa Joy Ocasla wrote: ↑04 Jan 2022, 04:27 I don't want to jump to any conclusions, but I believe this book will be followed by a sequel. Ideally, everyone or a large number of readers were dissatisfied with way it concluded due to the inconsistencies revealed. I completely agree with what you've expressed, but we can't overlook about the plotline and how it deals with a contemporary and relevant issue that speaks value in this day and age.
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