Ode to Tahchapa, Kuki Warrior.

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Kalee Hk
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Ode to Tahchapa, Kuki Warrior.

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Ode to Tahchapa, Kuki Warrior.

In the mountains high, where the winds do
cry,
A warrior stood, beneath the sky.
Tahcha Pa, brave and true,
With the strength of heart, few ever
knew.

His sword was sharp, his spirit bold,
A tale of courage, forever told.
He fought for land, for kin, for pride,
With the Kuki spirit by his side.

Now in the whispers of the trees,
His name is sung upon the breeze.
Tahcha Pa, we honor thee,
In our hearts, forever free.

~ Rivka
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I have to ask- where does he come from?
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Post by Esther-David »

I like this a lot. It feels like folklore passed down for generations. I think there needs to be just a little more so the reader knows more about Tahchapa and his accomplishments.
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Post by Bonnie Braud »

Beautifully written frm 1 poet 2 another ❤️
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