Thank you for mentioning the rewrite again! I want people to know I'm listening! Lol!hsimone wrote:I thought the work was original, clever, and though twisted at times, it was something that was hard to put down.
The only part that I took "issue" with is the editing and at times the one-dimensional characters. However, the author has stated that she is working on a rewrite that will better these two areas, so I am not overly concerned.
I almost forgot that I felt really bad about Beth, the librarian, getting murdered, and how it didn't seem to affect many of the characters. I would have thought that the brothers would have been more bothered by it, but I guess they had bigger things on their minds.
Hum, poor Beth. Yes, they did like Beth and she did call Doug, Douggie. They were knee deep in Martha poop and wanted to figure that all out; so I guess they were distracted. I will look that over in the rewrite and see if I can find some compassion. ☺