Vivian
- geoffrey ngoima
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Vivian
Vivian, your name
Is a sigh,
Vivian, your name
Is
A tombstone of
Names, and
By and by
Your name without an
End
Became, when
Your name became an
End.
~GNN
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- geoffrey ngoima
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Lol, Okay, the first letters of the poem read, Vivian, Bye Bye.Vivian Paschal wrote:I must confess, I don't really understand this poem, but I do like the end. Plus, I like that it features my name
I wrote this poem many years ago; Vivian was my first love and I can't say it was a mutual feeling of love that we shared. I dragged out the sick relationship for years,... Anyway, she was my first muse, and when I say her name is tombstone of names, I mean the memory of her, what I felt, had killed every relationship/thing that I had since her, including myself. The second and third stanza say what I found out; that if I wanted to get over the feelings I had, I had to try not forget her and own everything that was, that is, and to always have a special place for her in my heart or head or whatever.
Anyway, John Grisham is your fav author? I loved that guy. I think I've read almost all his books. I think I said sth about him in my first review.