What did you think of Jennifer’s relationship with Marty?
- Yoli García
- Posts: 783
- Joined: 06 Mar 2017, 02:23
- Currently Reading: Fear Not, Dream Big, & Execute
- Bookshelf Size: 210
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-yoli-garc-a.html
- Latest Review: Dagger's Destiny by Linnea Tanner
What did you think of Jennifer’s relationship with Marty?
I was happy for Jennifer when she started falling in love with Marty because she had suffered the death of her former partner in her time. I liked that she fell in love with him in great part because of his intelligence. I think the author was a little slow developing this relationship in the first part of the book. Once they got serious, their relationship turned super steamy, which I understand because it is an erotic book after all. However, I think the author went over the top with how many of their friends they slept with. I did not quiet understand the need for them to sleep with many of their close friends.
-Gabriel García Márquez
- Christina Rose
- Previous Member of the Month
- Posts: 1272
- Joined: 27 Jun 2017, 08:41
- Currently Reading:
- Bookshelf Size: 135
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-christina-rose.html
- Latest Review: The Last Leaf to Fall by Amy M. Watson
- Reading Device: B00IKPYKWG
-
- Posts: 28
- Joined: 03 Jul 2017, 20:36
- Currently Reading: Popular Crime
- Bookshelf Size: 20
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-radioactivelyradiant.html
- Latest Review: "Raven's Peak" by Lincoln Cole
- Christina Rose
- Previous Member of the Month
- Posts: 1272
- Joined: 27 Jun 2017, 08:41
- Currently Reading:
- Bookshelf Size: 135
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-christina-rose.html
- Latest Review: The Last Leaf to Fall by Amy M. Watson
- Reading Device: B00IKPYKWG
I agree. I feel like it didn't have a natural flow.radioactivelyradiant wrote:I enjoyed the including of the romance, especially Jennifer's reasoning for falling for Marty. However, the transition from tame to erotic seemed a bit out of place for me.
- MrsCatInTheHat
- Posts: 3817
- Joined: 31 May 2016, 11:53
- Favorite Book: Cry the Beloved Country
- Currently Reading:
- Bookshelf Size: 376
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-mrscatinthehat.html
- Latest Review: Marc Marci by Larry G. Goldsmith
- Reading Device: B00JG8GOWU
- Publishing Contest Votes: 0
- Yoli García
- Posts: 783
- Joined: 06 Mar 2017, 02:23
- Currently Reading: Fear Not, Dream Big, & Execute
- Bookshelf Size: 210
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-yoli-garc-a.html
- Latest Review: Dagger's Destiny by Linnea Tanner
I think the author wanted to portray that even though their relationship was not typical, they had a typical family life.
-- 05 Nov 2017, 11:58 --
Yes! I think the book could have been erotic without going out of place like that. And even if the author’s intention was to portray a what a polyamory relationship is about, I think is was too much.radioactivelyradiant wrote:I enjoyed the including of the romance, especially Jennifer's reasoning for falling for Marty. However, the transition from tame to erotic seemed a bit out of place for me.
-- 05 Nov 2017, 12:01 --
CatInTheHat wrote:I enjoyed watching them fall for each other. I found the number of people that they had liaisons with rather bizarre.
It was bizarre for me too. I did not understand the author’s need to write them sleeping with most of their close friends. It seemed like all their good friendships turned sexual, which was not necessary. It felt gratuitous.
-Gabriel García Márquez
- Christina Rose
- Previous Member of the Month
- Posts: 1272
- Joined: 27 Jun 2017, 08:41
- Currently Reading:
- Bookshelf Size: 135
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-christina-rose.html
- Latest Review: The Last Leaf to Fall by Amy M. Watson
- Reading Device: B00IKPYKWG
Bizarre is a good word for it!CatInTheHat wrote:I enjoyed watching them fall for each other. I found the number of people that they had liaisons with rather bizarre.
- ZeroChill
- Posts: 158
- Joined: 18 Oct 2017, 07:56
- Currently Reading: 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea
- Bookshelf Size: 48
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-zerochill.html
- Latest Review: "My Boogie board ride to Denmark" by Tedd Wallace
- BoyLazy
- Posts: 808
- Joined: 26 Apr 2017, 23:01
- Currently Reading: Temptation Trials Part II
- Bookshelf Size: 122
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-boylazy.html
- Latest Review: Heartaches 2 by H.M. Irwing
Rightly said.. the second half was different..radioactivelyradiant wrote:I enjoyed the including of the romance, especially Jennifer's reasoning for falling for Marty. However, the transition from tame to erotic seemed a bit out of place for me.
Reviewer | Blogger | Influencer
- Connie Otwani
- Posts: 2185
- Joined: 01 Nov 2017, 16:12
- Currently Reading:
- Bookshelf Size: 200
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-cotwani.html
- Latest Review: The Fisherman and his Foundlings by Phillip Leighton-Daly
I quite agree with you. I also found it strange the way Jennifer was able to leave to rescue her team, without a convincing explanation to her new husband.CatInTheHat wrote:I enjoyed watching them fall for each other. I found the number of people that they had liaisons with rather bizarre.
-Walt Disney
-
- Posts: 73
- Joined: 25 Apr 2017, 01:50
- Currently Reading: Final Notice
- Bookshelf Size: 173
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-prenaramesh.html
- Latest Review: "End of the Last Great Kingdom" by Victor Rose
-- 17 Nov 2017, 13:22 --
This is a very good point that didn't occur to me earlierCotwani wrote:I quite agree with you. I also found it strange the way Jennifer was able to leave to rescue her team, without a convincing explanation to her new husband.CatInTheHat wrote:I enjoyed watching them fall for each other. I found the number of people that they had liaisons with rather bizarre.
- BoyLazy
- Posts: 808
- Joined: 26 Apr 2017, 23:01
- Currently Reading: Temptation Trials Part II
- Bookshelf Size: 122
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-boylazy.html
- Latest Review: Heartaches 2 by H.M. Irwing
Reviewer | Blogger | Influencer
- Manang Muyang
- Previous Member of the Month
- Posts: 11187
- Joined: 02 May 2017, 20:17
- Favorite Book:
- Currently Reading: Donny and Mary Grace's California Adventures
- Bookshelf Size: 688
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-manang-muyang.html
- Latest Review: Your Great Name by Shawn Funk
- Reading Device: B00KC6I06S
Jennifer was portrayed as a "perfect" person - beauty, brains and character, she had them all! She got along with everybody: old people (Jules, for instance), exes (Marty's ex-wife, for one), children (Marty's and the other kids), and animals (dolphins, especially). She was totally flawless, save for her one fault of abandoning her team (which was glossed over in the end) and that revealing scar on her thigh (which was completely forgotten). Will our descendants all be flawless 900 years from now?
-
- Posts: 73
- Joined: 25 Apr 2017, 01:50
- Currently Reading: Final Notice
- Bookshelf Size: 173
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-prenaramesh.html
- Latest Review: "End of the Last Great Kingdom" by Victor Rose
Also, I really didn't like the fact that she was comfortable using another persons money, name etc. isn't that illegal as well as completely unethical ?
- BoyLazy
- Posts: 808
- Joined: 26 Apr 2017, 23:01
- Currently Reading: Temptation Trials Part II
- Bookshelf Size: 122
- Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-boylazy.html
- Latest Review: Heartaches 2 by H.M. Irwing
Most of us did not like the second half..radioactivelyradiant wrote:I enjoyed the including of the romance, especially Jennifer's reasoning for falling for Marty. However, the transition from tame to erotic seemed a bit out of place for me.
Reviewer | Blogger | Influencer