What Grace Means to Me

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Jeny S 1
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This poem is well written. I really like it. And I also love the way you show the real meaning of grace.
I think the poem holds a lot of power and can make a big impact on everyone's life.
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Post by ZACHAEUS OKOTH »

Yes.Informative poem.Enjoying life but not infringing other people's freedom in your happiness
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Wow, very inspiring, says a lot in a few words that serve to meditate and deepen. Thoughtful.
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Post by Tsitsidzaishe Berveley M »

This is exactly what Grace is....well written.
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Post by Athira J 2 »

Such an inspiring and mind evoking well written deep poem.
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Post by Farhana P j »

The poem " What Grace Means To Me" written by Scott hyghes. The poet says to society to be a good person who belive in himself and improve his behaviour from over going. The first 5 lines have rhyming words that will add attraction to the poem, but after that I feel like the line's are unorganised. It is good by organising the line's so it will have more impression on the poem . It is the poem where poet conveys a meaningful message to public to improve himself..
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Post by Hope Godivah »

It says it all but how can we balance both sides, we just need to live life the way it is, forcing it can result crossing the border
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Post by Kharmel Iorahen »

Beautiful piece and thoughtful provoking
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Post by Kharmel Iorahen »

Beautiful piece and thought provoking.
Makes one look at the true meaning of life, like all is in vanity at the end.
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Wow I like it very much 💞💞
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Post by Clarice Ochieng »

Love how the poet plainly wrote this ,,no need for trying to search for meaning of the poem , everything is is self explanatory 🥰🥰
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Post by Heather Hebard »

I think this was a great poem. It shows that there is a fine line between wanting to be the best version of yourself and not having any parts of the worst come out as well.
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Beautiful and powerful writing! Well done!
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Post by Jehanne Mandolado »

The piece feels like a reflection to me coz it reminded me to embrace good values rather than getting eaten by bad emotions and greediness in life. Balance is what I conclude in this piece, give balance in embracing oneself and overcoming difficulties in life.
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Post by Roal Patterson »

Insightful. A measure of equilibrium we all try to achieve. Beautiful in it's simplicity.
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