What Grace Means to Me

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Couzette Stoltz
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What a beautifully inspiring piece! It's a deeply meaningful and motivational poem that leaves you both calm and strengthened.
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A wonderful poem that talks about balance in a world that pushes you to your limits until you're spent and can't go on anymore. Well thought out.
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I love it. Several of the lines in the poem were nice and succinct and exactly the way I view life. My favorite lines were "to be content but not dead and to be motivated but not greedy."
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Post by Jessica Grovanz 1 »

To be assertive, but not aggressive.



To choose to make where you are now your personal rock bottom before hitting actual rock bottom.

To choose to turn your life around before it is too late and there is no life left to turn




Those are some of my favorite lines in the poem. I think it’s a real great poem. Good job to the creator.
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Post by Winnie Marokgu 1 »

It's a reminder to us human beings that we should always live by the rules and principles that we have made. A person's word is everything you need to learn to value your own word in order to be valued by others as well in that way your words will be respected!
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Post by Marilyn Neal-Woodall »

It's beautifully written and thoughtful. My favorite phrase is "To be inspired but not restless". There are so many times we get inspired by things and become restless in getting to the vision we saw. We have to remember to make clear goals and know how to accomplish them.
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Post by Angel William »

I would like to say that it's a good poem which motivates us. But in my opinion it will be more good if you use some sensitive and powerful poetic word which will make it better also if it follows a rhyming schme
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Post by angel wright 7 »

This such a beautiful peace. It was so calming, inspirational, and motivational that I had to print a copy of it just to have as positive words of affirmation.
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Post by RIFA-ATU AMADOU TALATU »

Love it.... It's a master piece
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Post by Caroline Kayeli »

Literally circles of life. If only we can be a bit kind to ourselves. A nice read!
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Post by Shane Sheard »

I feel it was pretty basic and ideally well written. I know poems aren't always gonna be a Miley Cyrus brand new chart buster but I feel the writer could have been a little more playful and not so black and white. A little long too for my liking but who am ??
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Post by Maithili Mishra »

great thoughts! Very inspiring
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Post by Francis Bram 1 »

What Grace Means to Me is a well thought poem; not only thought but also well researched by the author. From the poem, the author is inspiring the audience with an immense experiencial understanding of life based on proven theoretical way of handling life. Some of the inspiration is based on stoic way of life and religion well connected with actual life as lived or as wished to be lived by the author.
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Post by Grace Chimunda »

"To love and forgive unconditionally but trust intelligently"I loved this poem a lot and I find that it relates to me a lot.The fact that my name is Grace made me want to explore this poem a little bit more .Amazing work .
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Post by Dr Bizni Kuttappan »

I read that poem.. The poem is very meaningful with simple words but telling apt things which is very important for our life.. This gives a direction to our life, teach us.. Informative.. Love it..
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