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Re: What do you think could enhance the book?
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It is always helpful when a book's world building is properly developed without overwhelming the reader and definitely a map will be appreciated!Jay Lu wrote: ↑11 Jan 2024, 17:19 To enhance "The Great Migration: Book One" by Steve Ramirez, consider simplifying the initial complexity for easier reader engagement, further editing for language refinement, making characters more distinct and memorable, ensuring consistent pacing, delving deeper into underlying themes, and perhaps including visual aids like maps or illustrations. Expanding on the backstory and world-building can also enrich the reader's immersion in this fantasy world.
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