What changes you would make in the book, if you were the author?
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Re: What changes you would make in the book, if you were the author?
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I would make Cynthia a more rational woman, too.Jo689 wrote: ↑07 Jun 2019, 08:17 I was actually thinking about this:
I thought the book was alright, unlike most. However, even though I didn't think it was bad, there were a lot of things I would have changed in the book, say if I was the author. The main things that I would change in this book is 1) add a backstory, or flashback of the events that happened in the previous books and 2) Make Cynthia a much more smarter character lol.
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The only other issue I had was that there were no physical descriptions of the characters. We know Cynthia was cute, and had short hair. Those are the only concrete details I found. It just kind of messed with me that I didn't have a stable mental image of the characters.
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