Preview of two poems

[Xorplon]

Here is a preview of two poems I've written. Gaia and Gaia II
Gaia :
Gaia
Did you know that in china,
Women are considered less than Buddha?
Women are the reason we live and breathe
But the men oppress till they’re all sheathed.
Because they’re scared and insecure
don’t know how to handle life so they assure
That women are considered less
So that they can rule and oppress.
But what is better than a woman’s breast?
Maybe a pirates chest?
Full of treasure and of gold
But who can foresee what’s not yet told?
Greed,Money,Power and it will grab you within the hour.
So steer clear of the ego’s wants needs and desires
Or you will acquire the need to feed.
Feed off the energy off a woman, heck maybe you’ll get married.
But always remember she’s there for you, and she’ll love you like the Japanese love Haiku.
You need to get over your selfish needs, You just need to breathe.
Gaia II
Our perceptions are shut off so we cannot see
They’re forced shut yet we do not flee.

Our eyes are covered, we do not question.
Our eyes are closed, that is not fiction.

As our eyes begin to open we choose to take a stand.

To stand up for what’s honest, this is our land.

Our land, this is why we want to fight.
Our land, this is our childbirth right.
Our land is the reason we learned to share.
A representation of humanity, our true welfare.

This is our land, we don’t have faith in despair.
We are the human race. We are aware.


I'm a 21yr old aspiring author and wish to spread my creativity with the masses. It's time for a change of pace, we're the people who bring in a new age.

[Hope_0615]

I really enjoyed reading your post. You have some great talent. The subject of your poem was a great idea!

[sauerteig]

This is really nice and i enjoying this so much and for long time..keep it up