Letting Go

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thisgirl818
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Letting Go

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Standing in a lightless balcony
Listening to the rhythm of the falling rain
I let the coldness wrap around me
How do you find yourself
When the hand you hold
Is letting go?
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"How do you find yourself
When the hand you hold
Is letting go?"

Well done! Sad, but beautiful...like "the lightless balcony amongst the falling rain".
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