Look Me in the Eyes

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Sonu Moon
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Look Me in the Eyes

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Dear Readers!
Hope you love it, and feel it the way I do.


Look me in the eyes
by Sonu Moon

Look me in the eyes
if you get some time,
you will be astounded
once you recognize.

Tears are so small
when you will find seas;
there, you'll discover
a castle of dreams.

Whose pillars have drowned
into the flood that you bring
in my shy eyes
by always choosing to cling.

My hopes are all dying,
and burying them is hard;
in the yard of the castle,
now the castle has become a graveyard.

I promise, it's just a view,
there would be no disguise;
still, it's not too late,
just look me in the eyes.


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