Review of Time Before Time
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The concept of time travel to prehistoric times and an ancient lost civilization is intriguing. However, the writing itself felt flat, with too much telling rather than showing.
The beginning introduced the two main characters - scientist Emerson Whitmore and his bodyguard John Chantry. Their dialogue gave background information but lacked personality. When Emerson revealed his invention of a time machine, John's reaction of simply saying "Wow" felt unbelievable given the magnitude of this supposed discovery.
The explanation of how the time machine worked with magnets and relativity was a smart attempt at grounding the fantasy concept in real science. Yet it strained credulity without going into greater technical detail. And the subsequent preparations for their first trip barely scratched the surface of what would be involved in pioneering time travel.
On the positive side, the tantalizing prologue promises an epic scope to the story. The premise of a lost civilization destroyed by a cataclysm has great series potential if executed properly over future books. But based on this first installment, I worry the author may struggle with bringing such an ambitious vision fully to life.
Ideally, "Time Before Time" shows creativity but needs work on its realism and character development. With better dialogue, more attention to technical and logistical details, and deeper point of view writing, it could become a truly thrilling time travel adventure. As is, its flaws keep it to an average 4-star book despite the originality of concept. I would still mildly recommend giving it a chance if you enjoy the time travel genre. Just don't expect an exceptionally polished or immersive read. With effort, this could someday make a great series; for now, it's a moderately entertaining time killer.
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts on "Time Before Time" by Dan DuBose and Beau DuBose! Your detailed review really captures the essence of the book and its intriguing storyline. It sounds like a captivating read, especially with its exploration of alternate creations and interconnected planets. I'm particularly drawn to the emphasis on teamwork and character development. I'll definitely add this to my reading list—it sounds like a fantastic blend of sci-fi and military setting. Thanks again for the recommendation!
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