Desire to be a Star...

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Arneet k
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Desire to be a Star...

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Desire to be a Star

While looking at stars...
I asked God...
to make me a star...
But is this the only thing I desire to be...
No...
There is a desire...
to be the brightest...
to be somewhere alone in space...
to exist being noticed and unnoticed at the same time...
to be on its own...
to move at its own speed... own path
to be at peace...
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Harshi Sharma
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This small poem is full of thought of desire in life for youth who want to full fil their dreams In their lives.
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