Small or Strong

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Arneet k
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Small or Strong

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Small or Strong

Today someone told me...
if they ever wrote a book
(even though the chances are rare...)
they will add me on that book...
I know...
it will be as a small character...
not small as lower...
but small as a tiny one...
a little one...
unexpectedly they said...
but as a strong character...
shockinggggg...right??
because it is not that I do not see myself as a strong person...
it is just I want to be a small,
tiny,
little,
in this big-vast world...
so small that no one will ever notice me...
or bother me...
to exist...to vanish without anyone's noticing...
because I am too tired to be strong...
to carry the weight of this responsibilities...
so, now I just want to exist as a
cute, tiny creature...
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Hillary Ibe
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The theme of the poem isn't very clear to me
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