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Pawn

Posted: 29 May 2020, 20:54
by Samwisekoop
I am not a pawn on your chessboard.
Nor a knight on the field.
I am not the king, lurking in his tower.
I am the queen, and I have not yet shone my power.

Re: Pawn

Posted: 30 May 2020, 01:57
by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
Don't you think the title of this poem should be Queen? lol. You have expressed your sentiments well.

Re: Pawn

Posted: 30 May 2020, 05:30
by Sumansona1344
Your feelings can be felt through the poem. It is strong and bold(not a pun) at the same time. I love when you write poems like this. I love 'em.

Re: Pawn

Posted: 30 May 2020, 05:31
by Sumansona1344
ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: 30 May 2020, 01:57 Don't you think the title of this poem should be Queen? lol. You have expressed your sentiments well.
Yeah, I agree with you. I also think that the title should be Queen.

Re: Pawn

Posted: 30 May 2020, 10:12
by Samwisekoop
ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: 30 May 2020, 01:57 Don't you think the title of this poem should be Queen? lol. You have expressed your sentiments well.

Oh...Duh! Haha! Thanks, I didn't think of that! :D

Re: Pawn

Posted: 30 May 2020, 10:13
by Samwisekoop
How do I change it...? I don't think I can...

Re: Pawn

Posted: 30 May 2020, 10:49
by Samwisekoop
Sumansona1344 wrote: 30 May 2020, 05:30 Your feelings can be felt through the poem. It is strong and bold(not a pun) at the same time. I love when you write poems like this. I love 'em.
Thank you so much! But now you've got me laughing because of the whole "not a pun" thing. Bold...Haha! :D