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Samwisekoop
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Pawn
I am not a pawn on your chessboard.
Nor a knight on the field.
I am not the king, lurking in his tower.
I am the queen, and I have not yet shone my power.
Nor a knight on the field.
I am not the king, lurking in his tower.
I am the queen, and I have not yet shone my power.
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ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
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Don't you think the title of this poem should be Queen? lol. You have expressed your sentiments well.
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...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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Sumansona1344
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Your feelings can be felt through the poem. It is strong and bold(not a pun) at the same time. I love when you write poems like this. I love 'em.
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Yeah, I agree with you. I also think that the title should be Queen.ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: ↑30 May 2020, 01:57 Don't you think the title of this poem should be Queen? lol. You have expressed your sentiments well.
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Samwisekoop
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ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: ↑30 May 2020, 01:57 Don't you think the title of this poem should be Queen? lol. You have expressed your sentiments well.
Oh...Duh! Haha! Thanks, I didn't think of that!
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How do I change it...? I don't think I can...
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Thank you so much! But now you've got me laughing because of the whole "not a pun" thing. Bold...Haha!Sumansona1344 wrote: ↑30 May 2020, 05:30 Your feelings can be felt through the poem. It is strong and bold(not a pun) at the same time. I love when you write poems like this. I love 'em.
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