Take My Hand

Julez · Post by **Julez** » 21 Jul 2017, 06:46

At the deepest end of despair
At the darkest end of the tunnel
At the worst moment of depression
At the darkest hour of the night
At the deepest end of the river
At the bottom of the deep pit
Seems like there is no way out
Then a voice says to me
Take my hand

Grab hold don't let go
I'm here for you
Going nowhere
I won't leave you
Even if you want me to
I'm with you all the way
Just look up and grab hold
Take my hand

Juliet Esther · Post by **Juliet Esther** » 22 Jul 2017, 04:20

Nice poem, I loved it. Kudos

Julez · Post by **Julez** » 24 Jul 2017, 08:41

Thanks, Juliet

ANDREW MBAGO · Post by **ANDREW MBAGO** » 09 Sep 2017, 04:44

I really love the poem.It has deeply touched my heart such that I feel people should put their trusts in the Sovereign Lord.

KlareAllison · Post by **KlareAllison** » 09 Sep 2017, 05:17

Encouraging piece! In a world of unending challenges and discouragements, this poem holds out a candle. Congrats, Julez, on your efforts on the poetic.

Julez · Post by **Julez** » 10 Sep 2017, 19:56

I do appreciate your comments. Thanks so much Andrew and KlareAllison.

Gabyap · Post by **Gabyap** » 02 Nov 2017, 16:15

This is a very inspiring and beautiful one, good work.

Julez · Post by **Julez** » 03 Nov 2017, 04:57

Awwww. Thank you Gabyap

DATo · Post by **DATo** » 03 Nov 2017, 07:05

Very nice poem Julez. Thanks for sharing!

Julez · Post by **Julez** » 07 Nov 2017, 14:56

Thank you DATo

Thirielle · Post by **Thirielle** » 07 Nov 2017, 17:11

When I saw and read the title, it reminds me of the song 'I love you more than you'll ever know'. The song says, 'Take my hand, we'll walk awhile, we'll talk awhile. Feel my love always there beside you.' Simple words but there are so much meaning and emotions. Just like the poem you wrote.

johappy · Post by **johappy** » 14 Nov 2017, 01:29

I started tearing up! Very relatable, and I totally agree.

Julez · Post by **Julez** » 21 Nov 2017, 07:43

Thanks Thrielle. I wrote it at a time when I was quite low.

Thirielle wrote:When I saw and read the title, it reminds me of the song 'I love you more than you'll ever know'. The song says, 'Take my hand, we'll walk awhile, we'll talk awhile. Feel my love always there beside you.' Simple words but there are so much meaning and emotions. Just like the poem you wrote.

-- 21 Nov 2017, 07:45 --

Thank you, johappy?

johappy wrote:I started tearing up! Very relatable, and I totally agree.

Nash_Jay · Post by **Nash_Jay** » 24 Nov 2017, 21:50

Julez wrote:At the deepest end of despair
At the darkest end of the tunnel
At the worst moment of depression
At the darkest hour of the night
At the deepest end of the river
At the bottom of the deep pit
Seems like there is no way out
Then a voice says to me
Take my hand

Grab hold don't let go
I'm here for you
Going nowhere
I won't leave you
Even if you want me to
I'm with you all the way
Just look up and grab hold
Take my hand