Official Review: The Departure by Sujit Banerjee

Catherine Hsu · Post by **Catherine Hsu** » 24 Dec 2017, 05:20

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Departure" by Sujit Banerjee.]

3 out of 4 stars

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For someone who’s been in a terrible reading slump for half a year, I read through this book super fast - which is most definitely a good thing. I decided to read this book to review mainly because I knew it was a collection of short stories, and everyone who’s ever been in a reading slump knows: baby steps.

Rukhsat - The Departure is composed of twenty-six short stories, each inspired by a word beginning with each letter of the alphabet. Every story has a unique premise; for example, “Bhutan” is about a well-kept family secret - the illegitimate son who may not be who you expected. “Devesh” is about finding love again, on the most romantic day of the year. “Siraj” is about a boy who loses his innocence too soon and has sex for food out of desperation - but he manages to find it again, as he holds onto the memory of a generous man at an egg roll stand. “Zayan” is about a child who loses someone close to them, then grows up and loses themselves. But they remember the smell of green apples, a memory of their childhood - in a world that refused to let them have one. And there are plenty more short stories, each full of emotion.

It is absolutely amazing, what this author can do in a few pages. There is a beginning, middle, and end, for each story. Sometimes they are told in order, and readers can follow the life of a character as they grow and change. Sometimes the parts are told out of order, in a way that will allow the reader to piece the story together for themselves. Sometimes the last piece of the story is given to the reader in the final sentence, evoking a shocking feeling of unfamiliarity when the full picture is finally visible. Regardless, each chapter tells a full story, and I personally really liked how much could be understood with so little written.

I really liked all the characters as well. The author was also able to write about all characters in a way that placed them in the gray area between good and bad. Every one, in some way, had their own demons, internal conflicts, flaws, or memories, that really solidified them as an individual and allowed them to fit into their respective chapters. In each section, I also loved seeing how the characters interacted with one another, whether it was only in memories, letter-writing, or even only subtly through context.

For the most part, I also liked the writing style, as I really enjoyed the figurative language, as well as the manipulation of punctuation and spacing to emphasize certain sentences. However, I do think that this book is need of some heavy editing, as there were many formatting and grammatical errors. For example, in the preface there was a run-on sentence: “No, they never die they multiply.” In another chapter, the incorrect “its” was used: “Like a restless ocean and it’s even more restless waves…”, and in another chapter, there was an extra article: “A gash and a then a hand grasped my soul and yanked at it.” Sometimes there is an extra space before a period. These are definitely minor issues, but because there were too many errors, it slightly hindered my reading experience, and I could only rate this book 3 out of 4 stars, despite all its positives.

Overall, I’d definitely recommend this book to everyone, but I think readers of contemporary novels about social issues or people who like short stories would enjoy it greatly. I’m sure with some more editing this book would flow even more smoothly, and its effect would be even more powerful. Still, the author has crafted a book that is intensely emotional, eye-opening, and thought-provoking, and reading it was an unforgettable experience.

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Post by **kandscreeley** » 26 Dec 2017, 18:29

Well, regardless of the editing, it sounds like it's full of interesting stories. I like a good short story from time to time. I'm still unsure about this collection, though. I'll think about it. Thanks for the information.

Sahani Nimandra · Post by **Sahani Nimandra** » 27 Dec 2017, 03:08

The plot sounds juicy! The way the author captures different characters is amazing special each has something or some story to say on their side. Good review and the story is worth paying attention to.

MsTri · Post by **MsTri** » 27 Dec 2017, 22:44

Sounds like an interesting read; I especially like the idea of having poems based on each letter of the alphabet.

Mtsweni Nelsy · Post by **Mtsweni Nelsy** » 01 Jan 2018, 08:43

I like a series of short stories, and I think I would find the book a whole lot amazing...having read this review. Thanks for the review.

CommMayo · Post by **CommMayo** » 05 Jan 2018, 17:01

Sounds like a great book to ease yourself back into the pool of reading. I wonder how much of the grammatical errors stem from translation or English being the second language of the author...

inaramid · Post by **inaramid** » 06 Jan 2018, 21:44

Such an insightful review for a book that sounds equally insightful. I would love to read a revised edition. It's such a waste for a book such as this to remain unedited.

Sahani Nimandra · Post by **Sahani Nimandra** » 07 Nov 2018, 23:14

I saw through your eyes what this read has to offer and I am amaze as you are. Everyone has a past to a certain extend, and if we live in it there is no coming out of that. I believe this read reflects upon that. Thank you for this review!

Post by **Shrabastee Chakraborty** » 08 Nov 2018, 03:25

I love characters having a gray shade, because they seem more realistic in nature. I will give this story collection a try, thanks for the informative review.

María Andrea Fernández Sepúlveda · 08 Nov 2018, 11:30

I knew it was a collection of short stories, and everyone who’s ever been in a reading slump knows: baby steps.

Great decision! It’s the best way to get out of a slump, in my opinion.

It is absolutely amazing, what this author can do in a few pages. There is a beginning, middle, and end, for each story. Sometimes they are told in order, and readers can follow the life of a character as they grow and change. Sometimes the parts are told out of order, in a way that will allow the reader to piece the story together for themselves. Sometimes the last piece of the story is given to the reader in the final sentence, evoking a shocking feeling of unfamiliarity when the full picture is finally visible. Regardless, each chapter tells a full story, and I personally really liked how much could be understood with so little written.

I really liked all the characters as well. The author was also able to write about all characters in a way that placed them in the gray area between good and bad. Every one, in some way, had their own demons, internal conflicts, flaws, or memories, that really solidified them as an individual and allowed them to fit into their respective chapters.

These are such great accomplisments that speak volumes about the talent of the author. It must not be easy to create a whole plot in a few pages and I really love multidimensional characters. We are complex as humans and have a lot of grey areas, so I find this kind of characters much more realistic and easy to relate.

Great, compelling review, thanks!

fernsmom · Post by **fernsmom** » 09 Nov 2018, 00:25

Great review! Sounds original with each story starting with the letter of the alphabet. Also your comment was noteworthy as well: "It is absolutely amazing, what this author can do in a few pages. There is a beginning, middle, and end, for each story." With some editing sounds like it would be a good read!

LV2R · Post by **LV2R** » 09 Nov 2018, 20:38

It is interesting that this book has 26 stories, one for each letter of the alphabet. The characters the author wrote about are not portrayed all good or all bad, which makes them more believable to the reader. It sounds like this book helped you out of your reading slump!

Espie · Post by **Espie** » 10 Nov 2018, 06:59

It's interesting to note that a reading slump is not really that uncommon. Your insightful review is a good indication of quicker recovery, though. Thus, thank you.