What do you think The Face of Fear could of done better?
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What do you think The Face of Fear could of done better?
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This is one of the areas I normally hate in a book when the transitions are so abrupt and unexpected such that you have to struggle to check who is doing what. This is a good correction too.Alicia09 wrote: ↑30 Dec 2018, 00:35 I think the author could have included some sort of paragraph spaces or line breaks between the murderers conversations and the detectives conversations. At times, the change was very abrupt and almost confusing. They also could have included more information on Debbie's personality before she was kidnapped in the beginning of the book to generate more sympathy and concern over her sudden disappearance.
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I agree that the book was a bit too long. But I found that if you paid attention to the small details, there were clues as to who was the GhostFace killer.daydreaming reader wrote: ↑26 Dec 2018, 20:11 I think the information that is irrelevant to the plot, should be removed.Tidbits of information are nice, but paragraphs/pages long descriptions of places/persons can take toll on the reader and distract from the plot.