Official Review: 30th Century: Contact
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Re: Official Review: 30th Century: Contact
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Having only read the sample, I can only comment on the first 2 chapters. These were a mixture of intrigue and confusion for me. For example, I was puzzled by the need to arrange an explanation for the twins being away from their family and friends, after stating that Jenny had to conceal her identity in that century. Did this mean that the public in general were unaware of time travel but it had been revealed to family and friends? If so, why would they need to lie about the mission? One possible suggestion might be so as not to cause distress but I think they would have been supportive of the mission and look forward to hearing of the solution on the twins return.
I also thought the dialogue was very unnatural and characters were unnecessarily mentioned by name during some conversations.
I love time travel stories where events in the past or future are repaired (the BTTF trilogy being the most complete example of this scifi genre, in my opinion, as well as Quantum Leap) but I found the setup for this installment proposed too much that I found unbelievable even though I fully immersed myself in the concept once again. Transporting an asteroid back 5,000 years raises all sorts of problems for me, such as how that would alter the layout of the solar system, our galaxy and even the entire universe. In my opinion this would even threaten the existence of Earth, Mars and their respective inhabitants.
Finally, I was unaware that this was part of a series until reading your review. I'd be surprised if I'd even have made it to this installment if the writing is similar in the previous ones. Plus, I'd have been put off by the graphic sex scenes as well.