Destiny's Bound

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Destiny's Bound

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Your path is right before your wandering feet,
Your destiny is bound to you - it is complete.
Wait with me 'til fate and destiny meet.
Do not leave me to the winds of sorrow.
For there is no future where I am not your's,
Our future is such of the ancient lores.
We will taste the pain of division no more,
For I choose one life with you than solitude through all my days.
Take the jewel of the Evenstar as a sign
That in my heart you will always be mine.
For in my heart I will eternally pine,
For the one to whom I gave my love.
"Even the smallest person can change the course of the future." - Galadriel
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Wow! This poem is giving me vibes of melancholic and everlasting love.
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Yeah, I like to make poems for characters and happenings in books and movies. This is the love story between Arwen and Aragorn in Lord of the Rings. Their love story is sad but beautiful! Thanks for stopping by to leave a comment!
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Sumansona1344 wrote: 30 May 2020, 05:15 Wow! This poem is giving me vibes of melancholic and everlasting love.
Forgot again. :D
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