Modern fairytales and poems

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incredulo
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Modern fairytales and poems

Post by incredulo »

Hi all,

Sorry to spam you with a link but I've just started writing some short stories and poems aimed at children, but also with an added depth for adults hopefully. They are generally short stories fairytale-style with a modern edge (I haven't put every one up just yet) but there's a couple of poems up there too. If anyone could have a look and give me some feedback - positive or negative - I'd be very grateful as I'm still a young writer and haven't had any training or anything...pop them up on the blog or here, either would be fantastic!

You can find the link here:

Dr Incredulo's Incredible Book of Incredulity

Thanks very much!

Dr Incredulo
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victory08
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Post by victory08 »

in a few words - not bad story.. i read it really very fasr, because it's very interesting, but i think that there should be more sensuality, if you want to address your work to children :wink:
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