What Grace Means to Me

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Post by Ukaegbu Confidence »

This is an extremely thoughtful piece. You expressed the thoughts of a lot of us. I for one want to be confident without being perceived as arrogant.
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I want to move through life not minding what may or may not happen. To be brave enough to face life head-on. To look at my trials in the face without being scared or consumed.
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This makes me look at grace from a different perspective and I realize I've been experiencing grace in several areas which I need to be thankful for. Thank you for this.
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Post by Omobolanle Shittu »

Grace is evidence in almost all areas of our life only if we can pause and appreciate the things we have and stop focusing on the havenots. Thank you for broadening my thoughts on different grace I've been experiencing.
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Post by Nafisa Abdi Mohammed »

Wow, it's really inspiring and true palace in life....I love it
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Post by Ashwitha Acharya »

This poem beautiful describes the grace which we have to carry with us
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Post by Shawn Ferguson »

It's inspiring thoughtful and I think everyone should really think hard about it
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Post by MLHE123+ »

Grace is one of the "gr" words that live in the GR neighborhood of the Dictionary. It is a diverse population.
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Post by Therese Bensley »

It seems that quite a bit of time was put into this piece as it seems to be deeply personal in sentiment.
I think that this piece has connected with readers as it has managed to touch on so many points in just about every line.
Which proves how common man's trials and tribulations truly are.
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:D This is resonates with me on a level I cannot even begin to explain or describe. Love, love it. :tiphat:
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Post by Christian Kilapi »

Good poem
But the title is a religious one , I can even says christian one...this poem lack that religious or christian'a touch
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Post by Mbali Lembethe »

A well thoughtful writing, one could relate to. Well done!
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Nice piece
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Post by Lynn Kemigisha »

I absolutely love this piece. It is written exquisitely. I love how you applied the contrast and I really conquer with your perception of grace. I especially loved the part about boundaries.
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Post by Olga Markova »

A great poem, and I like how it motivates and sets an individual's vision of life! I think it summarises the missive of In It Together too.
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