What Grace Means to Me

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Anita Blackwood
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Re: What Grace Means to Me

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Simply be POSITIVE no matter what situation we humans found ourselves in.
Mabvuto Manda
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Post by Mabvuto Manda »

This is insightful , especially where it says to love and forgive unconditionally, but only to trust intelligently. Most times we don't add intelligence to trusting someone that's how c ok me we fall prey to being stubbed in the back.
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Post by Mabvuto Manda »

This is insightful , especially where it says to love and forgive unconditionally, but only to trust intelligently. Most times we don't add intelligence to trusting someone that's how c ok me we fall prey to being stubbed in the back.
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Post by Sophia Mcpherson »

Overall, the poem encourages the reader to strive for balance in all aspects of life and to avoid the extremes that can lead to unhappiness and harm.
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Post by Ogidor Chinasa »

Wow, what an inspiring poem. I really enjoyed it, and I've learned some tips too from it.
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Post by Nkechi Ukiwe »

This is mind-juggling. I especially love the line, 'to be rebellious and free but not a tyrant. Thank you Scot for this piece.
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Post by Nancy Moore 3 »

An extremely thoughtful piece. A balance in one’s life that most try to achieve in their lifetime, with just enough added reminders to go easy with oneself when acquiring that balance is difficult.
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Post by Louise Shankle »

Thoughtful and insightful. I enjoyed it.
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Post by Fidelia Ubini »

What grace means to me made me think of a fresh start, of forgiveness, of love of life all at once.
It is a very lovely piece worthy of reading daily.
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Post by Elmo Weerakoon »

When I read it I felt good within myself. I am a follower of the Buddha's philosophy. Most of these phrases relate to Buddha's teachings. The writer may have not realized this. But, it's true. Elmo Weerakoon
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Post by barbara eschner »

Beautiful outlook!
You touched on all the things that make us humans, striving for grace.
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Post by Emmanuel Chukwuebuka 2 »

A very nice piece indeed i most say, very close to seeing through our day to day battle and decisions.
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Post by Denise Kisakye »

It’s basically talking about what grace means to this person and it’s very relatable to basically anyone it’s pointing out to exactly what the human mind thinks about grace and the mistakes too. It is very empowering and factful. A must read.
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Post by Gloria Kinyanjui 1 »

That was a nice piece of art. I loved it
Bhavna Yadav 2
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Post by Bhavna Yadav 2 »

It's good and balanced poem with good words.
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