Review of Future Vision

Amy K Collier · Post by **Kigen Valarie** » 03 Jul 2023, 09:55

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Future Vision" by J Sain.]

3 out of 5 stars

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Brian Alexander has secured a position at MIT. Under the protection of the FBI after losing his father in a tragic laboratory accident, he is not having a well-balanced life. The FBI is only protecting him because they think he may accomplish some of the scientific inventions his father didn't finish. However, Delphi is also after Brian to retrieve some of the leftover documents from his father. Six years have passed, and no news of Jonathan Alexander's research has come out. However, Brian is aware of a secret that no one else is aware of. This is a secret that will benefit all those keen on Brian's life, but is it time to let it be known?

Future Vision by J. Sain is a compelling story that portrays his love for science. Though it is fiction, it is easy to see that J. Sain is fascinated by the world of science. I love how the prologue piqued my interest in the story. However, the events that followed were very predictable. The time jumps in Brian's life made the book look generic. This proved to be a false assumption, as I realized what the author was preparing for. Regarding this, I would say the author's art of story building is not very perfect, and improvements might have to be made to begin the story on a note that interests the reader. It's important to take note of all of J. Sain's words, as they are all important to the plot.

I was fascinated with how the book began with words of wisdom from the Bible and famous as well as renowned people like Isaac Newton. Thorough descriptions of the characters provided a good background for the characters. I loved how well the description of Emma was. It was hard to be prepared for the turn of events, as suspense was the author's core weapon. I loved the explanations of the Higgs field and alternate dimensions.

The science and action parts of this book are the most well-developed. It was fun reading about how these events unfolded. Brian followed in his father's footsteps to become a scientist. As he fought with Gerard, Delphi's minion, it was easy to see that although he was inexperienced in the art of combat compared to Gerard, who was a master at this, he still proved to be efficient with skills that anyone could pick out through life.

Future Vision has some great plot twists that I will not mention due to fear of providing spoilers. Not everyone in the book could be trusted, and I decided to treat each one as a suspect. I would love to mention that this book would be better if every aspect was carefully dealt with. Enough information was not provided for some of the events that happened. An example is: if in the car Brian was in a phase bubble, why could he see if the light was of no use in the car? If the viewscreen served this purpose to enable Brian to see outside, how could he see the viewscreen? I'm not saying this aspect was not discussed, but it could have been discussed better. The relationship between father and son could also be improved, as it was more of a coworker's relationship.

I rate Future Vision by J. Sain 3 out of 5 stars. I loved the plot, and it pains me to give it a less-than-perfect rating. The negative aspects discussed are the reason I deducted two precious stars. The book had a few countable errors, and I commend the professional editing. Character development is perfect, and the book was attention-grabbing.

As I conclude, I'm certain that anyone who loves science will love the book. The experiments done by Jonathan and Brian Alexander are explained in detail, and it's like attending a science lesson. I'm not a science fanatic, but J. Sain is, and he made me love it and also mesmerized me with the many lessons I learned. Computer fanatics will also love the narration. Brian Alexander's knowledge of computers filled in where his father's knowledge was deficient. The open end of the book has me hoping for a sequel.

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Ram Uday Mahajan · Post by **Ram Uday Mahajan** » 13 Jul 2023, 12:05

Thank you for your insightful review of "Future Vision" by J. Sain. Your appreciation for the author's passion for science shines through, and I agree that the book's science and action elements are well-developed. The plot twists kept you engaged, and the descriptions of characters were thorough. While there were some predictable moments and areas for improvement in story building and character relationships, the overall reading experience was enjoyable. Your feedback is valuable, and it's clear that you paid attention to every important detail.

Kebun Bunga · Post by **Kebun Bunga** » 16 Jul 2023, 06:03

The feedback you provided for the review of "Future Vision" effectively captures the strengths and weaknesses of the book. You begin by acknowledging the author's love for science and how it shines through the story. Your mention of the prologue piquing your interest and the well-developed science and action parts showcases the book's engaging aspects.

Your critique regarding predictability and generic storytelling in some parts of the book is constructive feedback that highlights areas for improvement. Additionally, your points about the need for better discussion and clarification of certain aspects, such as the phase bubble and the relationship between father and son, provide specific examples of where the book could benefit from more thorough development.

Your rating of three out of five stars, along with the explanation for deducting two stars due to the discussed negative aspects, showcases a fair evaluation of the book. Your acknowledgment of the professional editing, character development, and attention-grabbing nature of the book adds credibility to your review.

Your recommendation for science and computer enthusiasts, as well as the mention of lessons learned and the hope for a sequel, provides valuable insights for potential readers.

Amy K Collier · Post by **Kigen Valarie** » 16 Jul 2023, 07:30

Ram Uday Mahajan wrote: ↑13 Jul 2023, 12:05 Thank you for your insightful review of "Future Vision" by J. Sain. Your appreciation for the author's passion for science shines through, and I agree that the book's science and action elements are well-developed. The plot twists kept you engaged, and the descriptions of characters were thorough. While there were some predictable moments and areas for improvement in story building and character relationships, the overall reading experience was enjoyable. Your feedback is valuable, and it's clear that you paid attention to every important detail.

It's amazing that you think the book is interesting. I'd be happy if you tried it too. You seem to be a science enthusiast. I hope you come back to tell me of the experience.

Amy K Collier · Post by **Kigen Valarie** » 16 Jul 2023, 07:32

Sondang Hotmauli wrote: ↑16 Jul 2023, 06:03 The feedback you provided for the review of "Future Vision" effectively captures the strengths and weaknesses of the book. You begin by acknowledging the author's love for science and how it shines through the story. Your mention of the prologue piquing your interest and the well-developed science and action parts showcases the book's engaging aspects.

Your critique regarding predictability and generic storytelling in some parts of the book is constructive feedback that highlights areas for improvement. Additionally, your points about the need for better discussion and clarification of certain aspects, such as the phase bubble and the relationship between father and son, provide specific examples of where the book could benefit from more thorough development.

Your rating of three out of five stars, along with the explanation for deducting two stars due to the discussed negative aspects, showcases a fair evaluation of the book. Your acknowledgment of the professional editing, character development, and attention-grabbing nature of the book adds credibility to your review.

Your recommendation for science and computer enthusiasts, as well as the mention of lessons learned and the hope for a sequel, provides valuable insights for potential readers.

I love your thorough review of my review

. I'll learn from you and maybe start doing the same.

NetMassimo · Post by **NetMassimo** » 21 Jul 2023, 14:56

This novel has several interesting elements and twists that keep the reader's attention until the end. Possibly, it needs just a bit more editing to "polish" some parts to make it excellent. Thank you for your great review!

Amy K Collier · Post by **Kigen Valarie** » 09 Dec 2023, 06:29

NetMassimo wrote: ↑21 Jul 2023, 14:56 This novel has several interesting elements and twists that keep the reader's attention until the end. Possibly, it needs just a bit more editing to "polish" some parts to make it excellent. Thank you for your great review!

I would love to now if this is a topic you'd be interested in reading. Aside from the negatives I had a great time.

NetMassimo · Post by **NetMassimo** » 09 Dec 2023, 07:35

Kigen Valarie wrote: ↑09 Dec 2023, 06:29
NetMassimo wrote: ↑21 Jul 2023, 14:56 This novel has several interesting elements and twists that keep the reader's attention until the end. Possibly, it needs just a bit more editing to "polish" some parts to make it excellent. Thank you for your great review!
I would love to now if this is a topic you'd be interested in reading. Aside from the negatives I had a great time.

If the author does a revised edition, I'm considering reading it, as it's a type of novel I find interesting.

Vinay Penubothu · Post by **Vinay Penubothu** » 04 Mar 2024, 13:26

Thank you for your thoughtful review! Your perspective has definitely sparked my curiosity, and I'm eager to delve into the book. Your insights have convinced me that it's a must-read, and I appreciate you sharing your thoughts. Your review has inspired me to explore further.