What Grace Means to Me

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Jessica Burford
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Re: What Grace Means to Me

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Sounds very well thought out but it also sounds like somebody who has had the easier side of life in society. A lot of what was spoken is choices taken out of your hands when you are dealt a lower hand of society in this life from the beginning.
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Post by Ma Elena Masilang »

This poem is a great example of strong discipline..it teaches us how to control our emotions and stop to our limitations..Thus it shows us how to be graceful with boundaries, yes for me it's a superb definition ourselves, a great poem indeed..
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beautifully curated....touches the heart chords...its like everything of life being considered...beautiful yet shows the importance of the soul
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Post by Amandeep Kaur 84 »

This is like reading without any efforts.👍👍
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Post by Aarohi Desai »

It is simple yet powerful. I like the way how the poet describe about small minute things that happens in everyday life and how it describes equality between opposite sides. Everything in life should be balanced. It’s really related as it describes about how the life is. The phrases I love the most are where the poet tells about to be brave but not fearless. I think that being brave all the time is not how it’s supposed to be , sometimes being vulnerable and showing your fears is necessary too . Secondly how he talks about how to have fun in life without being too attached or cling . Being attached to someone or something is like poison or addiction. Thirdly to love and appreciate, without jealousy, cowardly, possessiveness and controlling. It is necessary in some part of life but too much of it can be suffocating. Apart from that I also enjoy the part where the poet describe about ultimate inner peace without suffering from the past experiences and also where he talks about to take a turn in life before it’s too late and there is no meaning left in this life. Overall it’s all about life and equality
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Post by Angela Keyede »

A lovely poem on being yourself. Grace is everything to me.
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What struck me most about this poem was its universality. It spoke to the human experience in a way that resonated deeply with my own journey.
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Post by Gene Ceccato »

Excellent poem on a day when my husband and I are having difficulty with a Workers Comp doctor. It is very informative, and I will keep it in my home on the wall to remind me daily how lucky we are to be here!
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Post by Danyt »

Great piece of work! It speaks volumes to the delicate balance of life that most are not conscious of.
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Post by designross »

Excellent. You showed us a perfect example of using your consciousness without trying. Thank you.
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Post by Miri Lynn »

That was done beautifully! Way to go !
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Post by MANISHA BARI »

Well described
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Post by Niharika Sharma 6 »

A very thoughtful poem, it's genuinely unique.
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Post by Cherry Estacio »

Nice poem. I love it. It's all about balancing life by letting yourself be free.
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Post by Desiree Ferreira »

Such beautiful insight and wisdom, Scott. Thank you for blessing my morning with those words from your heart.
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