Review of Kids Can Change The World
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The review has good content, but it does give a little too much information to the reader. It's one step away from telling a spoiler. Also, there are a few grammar mistakes. For instance:
It should read "The elephant was done observing her kind having their precious tusks ripped off by greedy and malicious poachers.""The elephant was done observing her kind being ripped off of their precious tusks by greedy and malicious poachers."