Review of A Story of the Beginning (Revised Edition)

[Chimdik Chimezi]

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "A Story of the Beginning (Revised Edition)" by Jason Albano.]

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4 out of 5 stars

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A Story of the Beginning (Revised Edition) is a fiction work by Jason Albano. This copy, which is the updated version of the 2016 publication, "Giovanni Salzano the Traveling Mercenary: A Story of the Beginning," came with proper references, corrected historical information, additional chapters, etc. The story in this book revolves around Giovanni whose father, Corradeo was seen on April 28, 1509, in the Republic of Venice, telling the family to be of good courage as he prepared with his brother Bonaventure for battle with the French. These men were mercenaries who pledged allegiance to the Compagnia Mercenaria Libera del Grande Imperium, translated as the Free Mercenary Company of the Greater Imperium. As the story progresses, the Faithful Eternal of Rome decides to eliminate the Salzano family. Do you want to know why? Did these two brothers make it back alive from the battle? Keep reading. Felicia, on the other hand, was a beautiful young girl in love with Giovanni. Her parents seemed unsupportive because they wanted her to marry Aldus in the hopes of increasing family wealth.

The one thing I like about this book is the author's descriptive prowess; the fighting scenes were so real that I felt like I was featured in the events that happened in this book. Also, the editing and character development in this book were professionally done. This book has a lot of Italian language and the corresponding English translation that an interested mind can learn from.

I kept searching for a clue as to why a priest would take up the sword and attack Salzano Villa. The adage that the sins of the ancestors have a way of coming back to haunt the children was well captured in this book. It happened that the Salzano's are mercenaries, and to be free, a debt must be paid. Read through this book to learn about this debt, which must be paid to guarantee freedom.

If there is a continuation of a series in this book, I would like to read it and know if Giovanni succeeds in taking down the pope and Father Saul, who was after his life; did he build back his inheritance? I would also like to know more about Giovanni's love life; did he take Felicia back as his lover? This book has a lot of bowdlerized scenes, so the prospective reader should be aware. In consideration of the above, this book receives a four out of five stars. I feel the story in the book should be developed more.

Finally, I recommend this book to those who love reading war thrillers and suspense books. This book will also be a good read for war veterans and anyone interested in learning the Italian language.
 

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[Miracle Oge Adaeze]

"The one thing I like about this book is the author's descriptive prowess.." This is an essential element in a book. It helps to paint a vivid picture of the scenes in the readers mind. This is amazing. Thank you for the review.

[Stephen Pokoo]

Your review, with its astute analysis and captivating style, adds to our understanding of the book and its topics. It's an excellent resource for fellow readers. Thank you for your thoughtful criticism.

[Alexander Victoria]

The book's vivid descriptions thrust readers into the heart of battle, making every clash and conflict pulse with life. Albano's storytelling prowess allows you to stand side by side with Giovanni, the courageous mercenary, and feel the adrenaline of his journey. The enhanced character development makes each individual leap off the page, sharing their hopes, dreams, and fears.

[Nenye Charles]

A Story of the Beginning by Jason Albanob sounds like an interesting work of fiction.I enjoy the author’s storytelling prowess.I equally enjoy reading books with good character development.

[Marina Flisvou]

Your review explained the book's plot and what you liked about it very well.
It's clear that you were curious about the story's background and the debt that had to be paid for freedom. Your interest in the characters and their future adventures is intriguing.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, and for mentioning that this book would be good for war thriller and suspense fans, as well as those interested in learning Italian. Your review has made me interested in reading the book too!