Review of WatchDogs Abnormal Beginnings

Post by **Anu Anand** » 08 Nov 2023, 05:02

[Following is a volunteer review of "WatchDogs Abnormal Beginnings" by Mike L Junior.]

4 out of 5 stars

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In 2020, Dr. Drake Nathan created a special chip to make people healthier, but it accidentally changed their DNA, causing the population to boom. By 2532, Earth was in big trouble, and most people died from toxic air. Only 1% survived, and they gathered in Georgia, but over time, they split into five nations. The survivors' descendants began showing unique abilities due to their altered DNA. They are called 'Abnormals'. These abilities made them different, and they faced discrimination. So, they formed groups called guilds to support them.

This background sets the stage for "Watchdogs: Abnormal Beginnings'' by Mike L. Junior, a story about these extraordinary individuals and their adventures in a post-apocalyptic world. Kaarina and Monty are Abnormals who want to travel to Xenora, to join a guild of Abnormals. They encounter Cole on their journey, and he volunteers to take them to Xenora, surpassing the Dead Zone, a dangerous zone where people hardly escape alive. Also lurking in the shadows are the Slayers, whose sole mission is to eliminate Abnormals. The question remains: will they make it to Xenora, or fall prey to the relentless Slayers? Dive into the book to uncover the thrilling answers.

The book proved to be an absolute page-turner. Within its pages, the characters' development and their intricate backstories are laid out comprehensively, enriching the reader's understanding. The fight scenes are vividly portrayed, immersing readers in the intensity of each battle. What truly sets this story apart are the distinct abilities of each Abnormal. For example, Kaarina can see the future, Monty can bend reality, and Cole has the power to control his nerves, allowing him to endure pain momentarily, even though he'll feel it later. Cole, with his seemingly less advantageous ability, often rises to face formidable challenges. How does he manage this feat? He achieves this with sheer willpower and advanced thinking—a power we can all harness.

What left me slightly unsatisfied with this book was the noticeable lack of meticulous editing. Throughout the story, I stumbled upon numerous minor errors that occasionally pulled me out of the narrative's flow. The naming mix-ups were particularly befuddling, like "As Greg took several quick punches from Greg." Now, imagine the confusion—it's Arthur on the receiving end of those swift punches from Greg. Despite these occasional hiccups, I must admit the plot was truly captivating. The potential of this story is undeniable, and addressing these minor issues through thorough editing and proofreading would undoubtedly improve the reading experience. I rate this book 4 out of 5, deducting one point for editing issues and the occasional use of incorrect names. As the first installment in this series, it left me on a tantalizing cliffhanger, eager to discover what comes next. On a side note, don't be misled by the book cover; no werewolves here!

This book is meant for adults because it has sexual content, strong language, violent scenes, and also mentions rape. If you're an adult looking for an adrenaline rush, this is the perfect book for you.

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The Keeper Jr · Post by **The Keeper Jr** » 10 Nov 2023, 11:47

The plot seems incredibly interesting. I like the abilities of the Abnormals and I always look for these kind of characters in a book. I also thought the book had something to do with werewolves but I'm glad you clarified. This kind of story is exactly my cup of tea and I would love to try it soon.
Thank you Anu for another amazing review.

Post by **Anu Anand** » 10 Nov 2023, 12:04

The Keeper Jr wrote: ↑10 Nov 2023, 11:47 The plot seems incredibly interesting. I like the abilities of the Abnormals and I always look for these kind of characters in a book. I also thought the book had something to do with werewolves but I'm glad you clarified. This kind of story is exactly my cup of tea and I would to try it soon.
Thank you Anu for another amazing review.

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! Indeed, the unique abilities of the Abnormals add a fascinating dimension to the story. Your continuous support means a lot, and I hope you thoroughly enjoy the book when you get a chance to dive into it! Happy reading!

Post by **Stephen Christopher 1** » 10 Nov 2023, 21:48

Thanks, Anu; I'm a fan of your reviews. This book is on my list to read, and the storyline sounds right up my alley. There seems to be a spate of poorly edited books currently doing the rounds. I'm at a loss to understand why an author wouldn't pay (it's not that much) a professional editor to ensure their work is up to par. Having said that, I'm going to give this one a go and let you know if I loved it as much as you did. Ps. too bad about the werewolves

Post by **Anu Anand** » 11 Nov 2023, 00:33

Stephen Christopher 1 wrote: ↑10 Nov 2023, 21:48 Thanks, Anu; I'm a fan of your reviews. This book is on my list to read, and the storyline sounds right up my alley. There seems to be a spate of poorly edited books currently doing the rounds. I'm at a loss to understand why an author wouldn't pay (it's not that much) a professional editor to ensure their work is up to par. Having said that, I'm going to give this one a go and let you know if I loved it as much as you did. Ps. too bad about the werewolves

Thank you so much for your kind words! I truly appreciate your support. It's a great point you raise about the importance of professional editing; it can indeed elevate the reading experience. Looking forward to hearing your thoughts on this book. Happy reading!

Ohmy Book · Post by **Ohmy Book** » 11 Nov 2023, 06:07

The unique abilities altered by DNA sound so cool! Just for that, I want to read this book! Even the term Abnormals is so interesting.
Moreover, I love good fight scenes. Your review has me convinced if I ever read this, I am going to devour this book!
I loved this line so much: "He achieves this with sheer willpower and advanced thinking—a power we can all harness."
Thank you so much for this excellent review! You have done a phenomenal job with this one (like always)!

RJ Reviews · Post by **RJ Reviews** » 11 Nov 2023, 10:40

I read this book a while back and was disheartened by the numerous errors that hampered the reading experience. Disappointed to know that it still contains errors. The storytelling would've been really benefited from a round of professional editing.

Post by **Anu Anand** » 12 Nov 2023, 08:52

ohmybook__ wrote: ↑11 Nov 2023, 06:07 The unique abilities altered by DNA sound so cool! Just for that, I want to read this book! Even the term Abnormals is so interesting.
Moreover, I love good fight scenes. Your review has me convinced if I ever read this, I am going to devour this book!
I loved this line so much: "He achieves this with sheer willpower and advanced thinking—a power we can all harness."
Thank you so much for this excellent review! You have done a phenomenal job with this one (like always)!

I'm sincerely grateful for your kind words! Thank you so much for your enthusiastic response to the review. It means a lot to hear that you found it compelling, and I truly appreciate your appreciation. I hope you have an amazing time exploring the world of Abnormals. Happy reading!

Post by **Anu Anand** » 12 Nov 2023, 08:54

RJ Reviews wrote: ↑11 Nov 2023, 10:40 I read this book a while back and was disheartened by the numerous errors that hampered the reading experience. Disappointed to know that it still contains errors. The storytelling would've been really benefited from a round of professional editing.

Indeed, it's unfortunate that the issues persisted, and I agree that professional editing can significantly enhance the storytelling. The plot was quite engaging, but the lack of editing proved to be distracting. Thank you for sharing your perspective on the book. Your input is valuable, and I'm grateful for your continuous support.

Bettny Andrade · Post by **Bettny Andrade** » 13 Nov 2023, 14:53

I love these types of themes. Fiction is one of my favorite topics. I will keep it in mind for a future reading and keep your instructions on editing and strong content in mind. Thanks for your review.

Post by **Anu Anand** » 13 Nov 2023, 22:33

Bettny Andrade wrote: ↑13 Nov 2023, 14:53 I love these types of themes. Fiction is one of my favorite topics. I will keep it in mind for a future reading and keep your instructions on editing and strong content in mind. Thanks for your review.

Fiction indeed opens up a captivating world of exploration! I appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts on my review.

Sakshi Singh 9097 · Post by **Sakshi Singh 9097** » 14 Nov 2023, 01:13

Your comprehensive review of "Watchdogs: Abnormal Beginnings" sheds light on the captivating storyline, diverse abilities of the characters, and intense fight scenes. The acknowledgment of some naming mix-ups is noted, and your insights into the potential of the story are valuable. Your mention of the mature content serves as a helpful heads-up for adult readers seeking an exhilarating experience. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

Post by **Anu Anand** » 14 Nov 2023, 05:39

Sakshi Singh1 wrote: ↑14 Nov 2023, 01:13 Your comprehensive review of "Watchdogs: Abnormal Beginnings" sheds light on the captivating storyline, diverse abilities of the characters, and intense fight scenes. The acknowledgment of some naming mix-ups is noted, and your insights into the potential of the story are valuable. Your mention of the mature content serves as a helpful heads-up for adult readers seeking an exhilarating experience. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

Thank you, Sakshi, for your thoughtful comment. Your continuous support is truly encouraging. Thanks again for sharing your thoughts!

Post by **Seetha E** » Yesterday, 22:31

Another review from you of what sounds like an absolute and adventurous entertainer. The plot sounds intriguing. I hope the editing is addressed in consideration of your comments. Thanks for an amazing review!