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emotions, movement, objects, places, people, people's thoughts, etc.
i like to use a lot of color words and similes

any way you can find an interesting way to describe someone or something will really capture the reader's attention. like:
before: The stripper passed the drunk on the sidewalk.
after: A drunk sitting on a cardboard mat outside of a tattered apartment stared after the gorgeous, leather-clad gladiator dancing past him.
this line from the novel i'm writing ^_^
its also good to write from different perspectives just to see where you can go with it
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I like your thought...blue_doona32 wrote:describe!
emotions, movement, objects, places, people, people's thoughts, etc.
i like to use a lot of color words and similes![]()
any way you can find an interesting way to describe someone or something will really capture the reader's attention. like:
before: The stripper passed the drunk on the sidewalk.
after: A drunk sitting on a cardboard mat outside of a tattered apartment stared after the gorgeous, leather-clad gladiator dancing past him.
this line from the novel i'm writing ^_^
its also good to write from different perspectives just to see where you can go with it

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Stories are actions + reaction + actions + reactions -- they're an ongoing chain of events that hint at deeper meaning.
I believe bad writing is "bad" because it's so descriptive that you feel like nothing is happening. Good writing is good because so much is happening you feel like you're going to die if you don't keep reading. Think about the Da Vinci Code. Terrible writing + hideous plot = incredible sales. Why? Because it's filled with action.
If you don't have actions and events in your story, you don't have a story. That's just my two cents anyway

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Very well put..blue_doona32 wrote:describe!
emotions, movement, objects, places, people, people's thoughts, etc.
i like to use a lot of color words and similes![]()
any way you can find an interesting way to describe someone or something will really capture the reader's attention. like:
before: The stripper passed the drunk on the sidewalk.
after: A drunk sitting on a cardboard mat outside of a tattered apartment stared after the gorgeous, leather-clad gladiator dancing past him.
this line from the novel i'm writing ^_^
its also good to write from different perspectives just to see where you can go with it