Official Review: Roan by E. R. Barr
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One of the glaring issues with Roan is its pacing. The story unfolds at a sluggish pace, with long stretches of mundane events that fail to captivate the reader. The plot lacks urgency and fails to build suspense, making it difficult to stay engaged.
Furthermore, the characters in Roan feel underdeveloped and one-dimensional. They lack depth and complexity, making it challenging to connect with their struggles or root for their success. Protagonists feel like caricatures rather than fully realized individuals, which detracts from the overall immersion in the narrative.
Another significant drawback is the writing style itself. While the prose is technically proficient, it lacks flair and fails to evoke the sense of wonder and magic expected from a fantasy novel. Descriptions feel flat, dialogue falls short of being engaging, and the overall writing fails to spark the imagination.
Additionally, Roan suffers from a lack of originality. The plot feels derivative, borrowing heavily from familiar fantasy tropes without adding anything new or innovative to the genre. As a result, the story feels stale and predictable, failing to offer any surprises or twists to keep the reader invested.
In terms of editing, Roan leaves much to be desired. While I didn't come across any egregious typos or grammatical errors, the writing could have benefited from tighter editing to improve pacing and streamline the narrative.
Overall, Roan by E. R. Barr is a disappointing read that fails to deliver on its promises. With lackluster pacing, underdeveloped characters, uninspired writing, and a lack of originality, it falls short of expectations for a fantasy novel. While some readers may find enjoyment in its familiar tropes, others may struggle to stay engaged. My rating is 2 out of 5.
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It was fun reading this book
It really interesting
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